compose a poem


Older kids are getting interested in writing these days.


After I checked out a simultaneous house called Potato Flower from the school library, the whole family asked me to build it together. ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€


I can't help but respond.


She's the mother bird that she created.


He was suffering from creative pain and barely gave me a chance to answer the question of balloons.


Follow the children's creativity and creativity.

It's really hard.


But I can't help looking pretty for a kid who's trying to do this and that.

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  • ๋ ๋‹˜์„ ์œ„ํ•œ ๋‹ต์‹œ๊ฐ€

    ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋ฉ‹์ง„๋ฐ์š”!! ์„ผ์Šค๊ฐ€ ๊ตฟ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

    $atom . 2019.05.03

  • ๋Œ€๋‹จํ•˜์‹ญ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ^^

    ์ €๋กœ์„œ๋Š” ๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์ง์ง์ง์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ^^

    $realprince . 2019.05.02

  • ์ฐธ ํ–‰๋ณตํ•œ ์ง‘์ด๊ตฌ๋‚˜

    ์ง„์งœ ๋งˆ์Œ์ด ๋”ฐ๋œปํ•ด์ง€๋Š” ์‹œ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ^^

    $nilgo . 2019.05.02

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    ์•„์ด๋“ค์ด ํฌ๋Š” ๊ณผ์ •์—์„œ ์ฑ… ์ฝ๋Š” ์Šต๊ด€์ด ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฑธ ์ตœ๊ทผ ๋“ค์–ด ๊นจ๋‹ฌ์•˜๋„ค์š” ๋”ฑํžˆ ๊ถŒ์œ ๋‚˜ ๊ฐ•์š”๋„ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์•˜์—ˆ์ง€๋งŒ ํ•ธ๋“œํฐ์— ์ง‘์ค‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ์˜์กดํ•˜๋Š” ๋ชจ์Šต์ด ์š”์ฆ˜ ๋ถ€์ฉ ์‹ฌ๊ฐํ•˜๋”๋ผ๊ตฌ์š”ใ…œใ…œ ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์•„์ด๋“ค๊ณผ ํ˜‘์˜ํ•˜์—ฌ ํ•ธ๋“œํฐ ๋ณด๋Š” ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ์ค„์ด๊ณ  ์ฑ…์„ ๋ณด๋Š” ์‹œ๊ฐ„์— ํˆฌ์žํ•ด๋ณด์ž๊ณ  ํ•˜์˜€๋Š”๋ฐ ์ด ๋˜ํ•œ ๊ฒฐ๊ตญ ์‹คํŒจ๋กœ... ์™œ๋ƒ๋ฉด ์™€์ดํ”„์™€ ์ € ์—ญ์‹œ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€๋กœ ๋‘ ์†์—์„œ ํ•ธ๋“œํฐ์„ ๋†“์ง€ ๋ชปํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๋ชจ์Šต์ด ์•„์ด๋“ค ๋ˆˆ์—๋Š” ๋ชป๋งˆ๋•…ํ–ˆ๋‚˜ ๋ด์š”ใ…œใ…œ "์•„์ด๋“ค์ด ๋ฐ”๋€Œ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๋ผ๊ธฐ ์ „ ๋ถ€๋ชจ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ๊ฐ€ ๋จผ์ € ๋ฐ”๋€Œ์–ด์•ผ"ํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊นจ์šฐ์นจ๊ณผ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์•„์ด๋“ค์—๊ฒ ์ข€ ๋” ์ฑ…์„ ์ฝ๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•œ ํ™˜๊ฒฝ๊ณผ ๋ถ„์œ„๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋Š๋ผ๊ฒŒ ํ•ด์ฃผ๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋”๋ผ๊ณ ์š” ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ง€๋‚œ์ฃผ ์ฃผ๋ง์— ๋ถ€์‚ฐ ์ˆ˜์˜๊ตฌ F1963 ๋ฌธํ™”๋ณตํ•ฉ๊ณต๊ฐ„์— ์œ„์น˜ํ•œ YES24์— ๋‹ค๋…€์™”์–ด์š” ๋นผ๊ณกํžˆ ์ •๋ฆฌ๋œ ์ฑ…๋“ค๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์•„์ด๋“ค์ด ๊ฑฐ๋ถ€๊ฐ์„ ๋Š๋ผ์ง€ ์•Š์„๊นŒ ๊ฑฑ์ •์ด ๋˜์—ˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ƒ‰๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ณต๊ฐ„์ด ์‹ ๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ๋งŽ์€ ๋ถ„๋“ค์˜ ์ฑ… ์ฝ๋Š” ๋ชจ์Šต๊ณผ ๋ถ„์œ„๊ธฐ์— ๋น ์ ธ์„œ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ์ง€ ๋ฐ”๋กœ ์ ์‘ ํ›„ ์ฝ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ์ฑ…๋“ค์„ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์™€์„  ํŽธํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ฝ์–ด๋‚˜๊ฐ€๋Š” ๋ชจ์Šต์—์„œ ๋ฐ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์˜ค๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์ž˜ํ–ˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ์„~ ๋•๋ถ„์— ์ €ํฌ ๋ถ€๋ถ€๋„ ์ •๋ง ์˜ค๋žœ๋งŒ์— ๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ์žฅ๋ฅด์˜ ์ฑ…๋“ค์„ ์‹œ๊ฐ„ ๊ตฌ์• ๋ฐ›์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ๋ณด๊ณ  ์™”๋„ค์š”^^ ๊ฐ€์กฑ๊ณผ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์—ˆ๋˜ ํŠน๋ณ„ํ•œ ์‹œ๊ฐ„๊ณผ ์•„์ด๋“ค์—๊ฒ ์ฑ…์— ์ข€ ๋” ๊ฐ€๊นŒ์›Œ์งˆ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ณ„๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋œ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์„œ ์ •๋ง๋กœ ๋ฟŒ๋“ฏํ•œ ์ฃผ๋ง ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ํ•˜์˜€๋‹ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค(๋ค์œผ๋กœ ์ฑ…๋„ ์ค‘๊ณ  ๊ฐ’์— ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๊ถŒ ์‚ฌ์™”์–ด์š”!!ใ…Žใ…Ž) P.S ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ์‚ฌ์ง„์˜ ์ฑ…์€ ์ €ํฌ ์™€์ดํ”„๊ฐ€ ์ถ”์ฒœํ•˜๋Š” ์ฑ…์ด์—์š”~^^ ํŠนํžˆ ๋ฉฐ๋Š๋‹˜๋“ค์ด ๊ณต๊ฐํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ ์žฌ๋ฏธ์žˆ๊ฒŒ ๋ณด์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด๋ผ๋‹ˆ ๊ด€์‹ฌ ์žˆ์œผ์‹œ๋ฉด ํ•œ๋ฒˆ ๋ณด์‹œ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ~์ฑ…์ž„์€ ๋ชป ์ง‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!!ใ…‹ใ…‹ #๋ถ€์‚ฐ #f1963 #๋ฌธํ™”๋ณตํ•ฉ๊ณต๊ฐ„ #ํ…Œ๋ผ๋กœ์‚ฌ #yes24 #์ฃผ๋ง๋‚˜๋“ค์ด #์˜ค๋Š˜์€์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ #์ฑ…์ข€์ฝ์ž #๋ถ„์œ„๊ธฐ๊ตฟ #์ข‹์•„์š” #ํผ๋ธ”๋ฆฌํ†  #publyto

    $atom . 2019.07.02 20:57

    47 thanks .ย 7,572.1058 PUB

  • ํ˜๋Ÿฌ๊ฐ€๋Š” ์‹œ๊ฐ„์†์—์„œ

    Writing

    #ํ˜๋Ÿฌ๊ฐ€๋Š”์‹œ๊ฐ„์†์—์„œ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์€ ํ˜๋Ÿฌ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ธ๊ฐ€? ์ง€๋‚˜๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ธ๊ฐ€? ์‹œ๊ฐ„์€ ํ๋ฅด๊ณ  ์ง€๋‚˜ ๋‚˜๋ฅผ 40๋Œ€์— ๋ฐ๋ ค๋‹ค๋†“๊ณ  ๋‚˜์—๊ฒŒ 40๋Œ€๊ฐ€ ๋˜๋ผํ•œ๋‹ค ์•„์ง๋„ ๊ทธ์˜›๋‚  20๋Œ€ ์ Š๋””์ Š์€ ๋งˆ์Œ๊ณผ ์—ด์ •์„ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๋‚ด๊ฒŒ 40๋Œ€์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์‚ด๋ผํ•˜๋Š”๋ฐ ์˜ค๋Š˜๋‚  ๋‚˜๋Š” ์—ฌ์ „ํžˆ ๋ฏธ์„ฑ์ˆ™ํ•˜๊ธฐ ๊ทธ์ง€์—†๊ฑด๋งŒ ์•„์ง์€ 20๋Œ€ ์ Š์€ ๊ฐ์„ฑ์„ ๋ฒ„๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์ง€ ์•Š๊ฑด๋งŒ ์™œ ์„ธ์ƒ์€ ๋‚ด๊ฒŒ 40๋Œ€๋กœ ์‚ด๋ผํ•˜๋‚˜?

    $yeonwu . 2019.06.26 18:25

    12 thanks .ย 871.0506 PUB

  • ๋‚˜๋Š” ๋‹น์‹ ์ด ํ–‰๋ณตํ•˜๊ธธ ๋ฐ”๋ž˜์š”

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    ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๊ณผ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ๋งŒ๋‚ฌ์„๋•Œ, ํ—ค์–ด์งˆ๋•Œ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์„ ์„ ๊ธ‹๊ณ  ๊ด€๊ณ„๋ฅผ ๋งบ๊ณ  ๋Š๊ธฐ๋ž€ ์ฐธ ํž˜๋“  ์ผ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ณผ๊ฑฐ์— ๋งŒ๋‚œ ์ฒซ์‚ฌ๋ž‘๊ณผ์˜ ์ด์ƒํ•œ ์ด๋ณ„๋กœ ์˜ค๋žœ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ์ง€๋‚œ ์ง€๊ธˆ๋„ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๊ฐ์ •์ •๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ์•ˆ๋œ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ตœ์†Œํ•œ ๋‚จ๋…€์‚ฌ์ด์— ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ๋„ ๋œจ๊ฒ๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ๋ž‘ํ–ˆ๋˜ ์‚ฌ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ์„œ๋กœ ํ—ค์–ด์งˆ๋• ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์–ด๋–ค ๊ด€๊ณ„ ๋ณด๋‹ค๋„ ์ข€ ๋ถ„๋ช…ํ•œ ์ •๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ํ•„์š”ํ–ˆ๋˜ ๊ฑด๋ฐ.. ์ด์ œ๋Š” ์ด๋ฏธ ๋Šฆ์–ด ๋ฒ„๋ ธ์ง€๋งŒ, ์‚ฌ๋Š” ๋‚ด๋‚ด ๋งˆ์Œ ํ•œ์ผ ์ด ์•„๋ ค์˜ค๋Š” ๋ชจ๋ฅผ๊ฐ์ •์ด ์žˆ๋Š”๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌธ๋“๋ฌธ๋“ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ์›€์ธ ๋“ฏ ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ๋„ ์›๋ง์ธ๋“ฏ ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ๋„ ๋˜ ๊ทธ์˜ ํ–‰๋ณต์„ ๊ฐ„์ ˆํžˆ ๋ฐ”๋ผ๋Š” ๋“ฏ ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ๋„, ๋˜ ๊ทธ๊ฐ€ ๋ถˆํ–‰ํ•˜๊ธธ ๋นŒ์–ด๋ด…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ฐ์ •์ด ๋‚˜์˜๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋งํ•ด๋„ ๋ถ€์ธํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์ง€๋„ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์–ผ๋งˆ์ „ ์–ด๋ฆฐ์นœ๊ตฌ์˜ ์—ฐ์˜ˆ๊ณ ๋ฏผ์„ ๋“ฃ๊ณ , ๊ณผ๊ฑฐ์— ์ €๋ž‘ ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ด ์žˆ์–ด ๊ทธ๋…€์—๊ฒŒ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์กฐ์–ธ์„ ํ•ด์ฃผ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‘์‚ฌ๋žŒ์˜ ์‚ฌ๋ž‘์ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ ์ผ๋ฐฉ์ ์œผ๋กœ ํ•œ์ชฝ์—์„œ ๊ทธ ๋งŒ๋‚จ์„ ๋๋‚ด ๋ฒ„๋ ธ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋…€๋Š” ์•„์ง ๋๋‚ด์ง€ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ, ๊ทธ๋Š” ํ˜ผ์ž์„œ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๊ณ  ํ˜ผ์ž์„œ ๋๋‚ด๋ฒ„๋ ธ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ €๋Š” ๊ทธ๋…€์—๊ฒŒ ๋๋‚ด์ง€ ๋ชปํ•œ ์•„ํ”ˆ์‚ฌ๋ž‘์„ ๋‚จ๊ธฐ๊ณ  ๋˜๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ์น˜์œ ๋ฅผ ํ•˜์ง€ ๋ง๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์ฃผ๋ฌธํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์‚ฌ๋ž‘์„ ํ†ตํ•ด ๋๋‚ด์ง€ ๋ชปํ•œ ์‚ฌ๋ž‘์„ ๊ณ„์†ํ•ด์„œ ์ถ”์–ตํ•˜๊ณ  ๋˜๋‡Œ์ด๋ ค ํ•œ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ž๊ฒฉ์ด ์—†๋‹ค๊ณ .... ์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ์˜ค๋žœ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ๊ฐ€๋”๋ผ๋„ ๋งˆ์Œ์˜ ์ค€๋น„๊ฐ€ ๋˜์—ˆ์„๋•Œ ์ƒ๋Œ€์—๊ฒŒ ์ƒ์ฒ˜๋ฅผ ์ฃผ์ง€๋ง๊ณ , ๋œจ๊ฒ๊ณ  ์ถฉ๋งŒํ•œ ์‚ฌ๋ž‘์„ ์ค„ ์ค€๋น„๊ฐ€ ๋˜์—ˆ์„๋•Œ ๊ทธ๋•Œ! ๋‹ค์‹œ ์‚ฌ๋ž‘ํ•˜๋ผ๊ณ ...... โ™ก ---------------------------------- ์ด๋ฏธ ์˜ค๋ž˜์ „์— ๋๋‚˜๋ฒ„๋ฆฐ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์•„๋ฌด๊ฒƒ๋„ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ๊ฑด ์ฒซ๋งŒ๋‚จ ์ฒซ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ์ฒซ๋งˆ์Œ ์„ธ์ƒ์—์„œ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•œ ์ฒซ์‚ฌ๋ž‘์ด์—ˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์•„์ง ํ˜ผ์ž๋งŒ์˜ ๋งˆ์Œ์€ ๋๋‚ด์ง€ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ด๋ฏธ ๋๋‚œ ์‚ฌ๋ž‘์ด์ง€๋งŒ ์ง€๊ธˆ๊นŒ์ง€๋„ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์‚ฌ๋ž‘์„ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•  ์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์—†์–ด ๋„˜์น˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ธธ ๋ถ€์กฑํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ธธ ๋„๋ง์น˜์ง€ ๋ง๊ธธ ๊ธด ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ํ˜๋Ÿฌ๋„ ์•„์ง๊นŒ์ง€ ๊ฟˆ์†์—์„œ ๋ถ€์—ฌ์žก์€ ์†์„ ๋†“์ง€๋ชปํ•˜๊ณ  ์Ÿ์•„๋‚ด๋Š” ์• ์ ˆํ•œ ๋ˆˆ๋ฌผ์ด ๋งˆ๋ฅด์ง€ ์•Š๋Š”ํ•œ ๋˜๋‹ค์‹œ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์‚ฌ๋ž‘์€ ์—†์„๊บผ์•ผ #์•„๋ จํ•จ #๋ฌธ๋“ #๊ทธ๋ฆฌ์›€๊ณผ์›๋ง ์‚ฌ๋ž‘์€ ๋‘์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ํ•จ๊ป˜ ํ•˜๋Š”๊ฒƒ ํ•œ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์˜ ๋งˆ์Œ๋งŒ ๋– ๋‚˜๊ฐ€๋”๋ผ๋„ ์ด๋ฏธ ๊ทธ๊ฑด ์‚ฌ๋ž‘์ด ์•„๋‹Œ๊ฑฐ์ง€ ๋‚จ๊ฒจ์ง„ ํ˜ผ์ž์„œ ์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ ค๋„ ์ฃฝ์„๋“ฏ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ์›Œํ•˜๊ณ  ์•„ํŒŒํ•˜๋”๋ผ๋„ ํ˜ผ์ž์„œ ๊ทธ ์‚ฌ๋ž‘์„ ๊ณ„์†ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š”๊ฑฐ์ง€ ์ด๋ฏธ ๊นจ์ ธ๋ฒ„๋ฆฐ ์‚ฌ๋ž‘์€ ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋˜๋Œ๋ฆด ์ˆœ ์—†๊ณ  ํ˜น์‹œ๋ผ๋„ ๋˜๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€๋กœ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ฑ„์šฐ๋ คํ•˜๋ฉฐ ๋ฏธ์•ˆํ•ด์ง€๊ธฐ๋ณด๋‹ค ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์‚ฌ๋ž‘์„ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์Šค์Šค๋กœ ๋งˆ์Œ์˜ ์ค€๋น„๊ฐ€ ๋˜์—ˆ์„๋•Œ ๋‹ค์‹œ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋„๋ก ๋‚˜์˜ ์ƒ์ฒ˜๋ฅผ ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€์—๊ฒŒ ์ฃผ๋ ค๋ง๊ณ  ์•„ํ”ˆ์‚ฌ๋ž‘์€ ์ ‘๊ณ  ์˜ค์ง€์•Š์„ ์ด๋ฅผ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋งˆ์Œ์€ ์ง€์›Œ๋ฒ„๋ ค ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€์—๊ฒŒ ๋ฌด์–ธ๊ฐ€๋ฅผ ์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ทธ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋œจ๊ฒ๊ณ  ์ถฉ์‹คํ•œ ์‚ฌ๋ž‘์ด๊ธฐ๋ฅผ....

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    ์–ด๋–ค ์˜ํ™”๋‚˜ ๋“œ๋ผ๋งˆ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ A์˜ ์™ธ์นจ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ A๋Š” ์ „์ฒ ์„ ํƒ€๊ณ  ์ง‘์œผ๋กœ ๋Œ์•„์˜ค๋Š” ๊ธธ์— ์ƒ๊ฐ์— ๋น ์กŒ๋‹ค. ๋ชจ๋“  ์‚ฌ๊ฑด๋“ค์ด ์ผ๋‹จ๋ฝ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ๋˜๊ณ  ์ž ์‹œ ๋˜์ฐพ์€ ํ‰์˜จํ•œ ์‹œ๊ฐ„๋“ค์ด๋‹ค. ๋ฐฐ์šฐ A๋Š” ํ•œ์ˆจ์„ ๋ชฐ์•„ ์‰ฌ๊ณ  ๋ชจ๋“ ๊ฒŒ ์ž˜๋œ ์ผ์ด์•ผ, ํ•˜๋ฉฐ ์˜…์€ ๋ฏธ์†Œ๋ฅผ ์ง“๋Š”๋‹ค. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋ชจ๋“  ์—๋„ˆ์ง€๋ฅผ ๋ฐฉ์ถœํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋‹น์žฅ์ด๋ผ๋„ ์ž๋ฆฌ์— ์ฃผ์ € ์•‰๊ณ  ์‹ถ์—ˆ๋‹ค. ์™ ์ง€ ์™ˆ์นต ๋ˆˆ๋ฌผ์ด๋ผ๋„ ์Ÿ์•„๋‚ด๋ฉด ๊ธฐ๋ถ„์ด ํ•œ๊ฒฐ ๋‚˜์•„์งˆ๊ฑฐ ๊ฐ™๋‹ค. ์–ด์งธ์„œ ๋ชจ๋“ ์ผ์ด ๋‹ค ํ•ด๊ฒฐ๋˜์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ๋„ ๋งˆ์Œ ํ•œํŽธ์œผ๋กœ ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋’ค์ˆญ์ˆญํ•˜๊ธฐ๋งŒ ํ•œ๊ฑธ๊นŒ. ์ด๋Ÿด๋•Œ๋ฉด ๋ฐฐ์šฐ B๋ฅผ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•œ๋‹ค. ์—‡๊ฐˆ๋ฆฐ ์šด๋ช…. ์–ธ์ œ๋‚˜ ํ•จ๊ป˜ํ•˜์ž๊ณ  ์•ฝ์†ํ•ด ๋†“๊ณ  ์–ด๋Š ์ˆœ๊ฐ„ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ A์˜ ๊ณ์—์„œ ์‚ฌ๋ผ์กŒ๋‹ค. ์•„๋‹ˆ, ์–ด์ฉŒ๋ฉด ๋ฐฐ์šฐ A๊ฐ€ ๋„๋ง์ณค๋Š”์ง€๋„ ๋ชจ๋ฅธ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋™์•ˆ ์‚ด์•„์˜ค๋ฉด์„œ ์ˆ˜์—†์ด ๋ฐฐ์šฐ B๋ฅผ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์ฐพ์•„๋ณด๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ํ–ˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๋‘ ๋ฒˆ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋งŒ๋‚  ์ˆ˜ ์—†์—ˆ๋‹ค. ๋œฌ ์†Œ๋ฌธ์—๋Š” ์บ๋‚˜๋‹ค๋กœ ์ด๋ฏผ์„ ๊ฐ”๋‹ค๋Š” ์†Œ์‹์ด, ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ฉด ์ค‘๊ตญ์œผ๋กœ ์žฅ๊ธฐ ํ•ด์™ธ์ถœ์žฅ์„ ๊ฐ”๋‹ค๋Š” ์†Œ์‹, ๋˜๋Š” ์ด๋ฏธ ๊ฒฐํ˜ผ์„ ํ•ด์„œ ์ž์‹์ด ๋‘๋ช… ๋‚ณ๊ณ  ์ž˜์‚ด๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ์†Œ๋ฌธ์ด ๋ฌด์„ฑํ–ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚ด ์ธ์—ฐ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ์˜€๋‚˜ ๋ณด๋‹ค. ๋ฐฐ์šฐ A๋Š” ์ฒด๋…ํ•œ ๋“ฏ ํ˜ผ์žฃ๋ง์„ ๋‚ด๋ฑ‰๋Š”๋‹ค. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์–ด๋–ค ํ˜•ํƒœ๋ผ๋„ ์ƒ๊ด€์—†์œผ๋‹ˆ ๊ผญ ํ•œ๋ฒˆ์ฏค์€ ๋ณด๊ณ ์‹ถ๋‹ค. ํ”๋“ค๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ „์ฒ  ์ฐจ์ฐฝ๋„ˆ๋จธ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๋ž‘๋น„๊ฐ€ ๋‚ด๋ฆฐ๋‹ค. ๋ถ์ ์ด๋Š” ํƒ“์— ๋ฌธ์•ž๊นŒ์ง€ ๋‚ด๋ชฐ๋ฆฐ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ A๋Š” ์ด์ œ๋Š” ๋ฉํ•˜๋‹ˆ ๋ฐ”๊ฐ™ ํ’๊ฒฝ์„ ๋ฐ”๋ผ๋ณธ๋‹ค. ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๊นŠ์–ด์งˆ๋งŒํผ ์‹ฌ๋‚œํ•ด์ง€๊ธฐ๋งŒ ํ•  ๋ฟ์ธ๊ฑธ. ๋‹ค์Œ ์ •๊ฑฐ์žฅ์—์„œ ์ˆ˜๋งŽ์€ ์ธํŒŒ๊ฐ€ ๋‚ด๋ฆฐ๋‹ค. ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์— ํœฉ์“ธ๋ฆฌ์ง€ ์•Š๊ฒŒ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ A๋Š” ๋ฌธ ์˜†์—์„œ ๊ฐ„์‹ ํžˆ ๋ฒ„ํ‹ด๋‹ค. ์ฐ๋ฌผ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ๋น ์ ธ๋‚˜๊ฐ€๊ณ  ๋ฐฐ์šฐ A๋Š” ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋ฌธ์•ž์— ์„œ์„œ ์ฐจ์ฐฝ์„ ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋ฐ”๋ผ๋ณธ๋‹ค. ํ•œ์ˆœ๊ฐ„ ์‹ฌ์žฅ์„ ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€ ์›€์ผœ์ง„ ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์ˆจ์ด ํ„ฑ ๋ง‰ํžŒ๋‹ค. ๋ฐฐ์šฐ B๋‹ค. ๋ฐฐ์šฐ B๊ฐ€ ์ „์ฒ  ๋ฌธ ๋„ˆ๋จธ๋กœ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ A์„ ์ณ๋‹ค๋ณธ๋‹ค. ๋„‹์ด ๋‚˜๊ฐ„ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ. ํ•˜๋Š๋‹˜ ๋ง™์†Œ์‚ฌ. ์ด๊ฑด ์•„๋‹ˆ์ž–์•„์š”. ์–ด๋–ค ํ˜•ํƒœ๋ผ๋„ ์ƒ๊ด€์—†๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ–ˆ์ง€๋งŒ ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๊ทธ์ € ์Šค์ณ์ง€๋‚˜๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ํ•˜์ž–์•„์š”. ์ „์ฒ ์ด ์›€์ง์ด๊ธฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ–ˆ๊ณ  ๋ฐฐ์šฐ B์˜ ๋ชจ์Šต์ด ์ ์ฐจ ์‚ฌ๋ผ์ ธ ๊ฐ„๋‹ค. ์ฒด๋…ํ–ˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ ๋ฌด๋„ˆ์ ธ ๋‚ด๋ ค๋ฒ„๋ฆฐ ๊ฐ์ •์„ ์ถ”์ˆ˜๋ฆด์ˆ˜๊ฐ€ ์—†๋‹ค. ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์˜ ์›…์„ฑ๊ฑฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์†Œ๋ฆฌ์— ์‹œ์„ ์„ ์˜ฎ๊ธด๋‹ค. ๋‹ฌ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ „์ฒ ์„ ํ–ฅํ•ด์„œ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ B๊ฐ€ ๋‹ฌ๋ ค์˜จ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์†Œ๋ฆฌ์นœ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค.์Œ.์—ญ.์—.์„œ.๋‚ด.๋ ค. ๊ทธ๋•Œ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์–ผ์–ด๋ถ™์—ˆ๋˜ ์‹ฌ์žฅ์ด ๋›ฐ๊ธฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•œ๋‹ค. ์ฃผ์ฒดํ•˜์ง€ ๋ชปํ•  ๊ฐ์ •์ด ๊ฐ‘์ž๊ธฐ ์ „์‹ ์„ ํœ˜๊ฐ๋Š”๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์Œ ์ •๊ฑฐ์žฅ์—์„œ ๋‚ด๋ฆฐ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ A๋Š” ์ด์ „ ์ •๊ฑฐ์žฅ์„ ํ–ฅํ•ด ๋‹ฌ๋ฆฐ๋‹ค. ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ฆฌ๊ณ ๋งŒ์€ ์žˆ์„ ์ˆ˜๋Š” ์—†๋‹ค. ๋น„๋Š” ๊ฑฐ์„ธ์กŒ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ฑฐ์ถ”์žฅ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์šด ์šฐ์‚ฐ์„ ์ง‘์–ด ๋˜์ง€๋‹ค. ๋จธ๋ฆฟ์†์€ ์˜จํ†ต ๋ฐฐ์šฐ B์˜ ์ƒ๊ฐ๋งŒ ๊ฐ€๋“ํ•˜๋‹ค. ์—‡๊ฐˆ๋ฆฐ๊ฑธ๊นŒ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ B๊ฐ€ ์—†๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์žˆ์—ˆ์–ด์•ผ ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ. ์ž…์ˆ ์„ ์งˆ๋ˆ ๊นจ๋ฌธ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์‹œ ์ฒ˜์Œ ์ •๊ฑฐ์žฅ์„ ํ–ฅํ•ด ๋‹ฌ๋ฆฐ๋‹ค. ์ด๋ฏธ ๋น„์— ํ™€๋”ฑ ์ –์–ด ๋‚ด๋”›๋Š” ๋ฐœ๊ฑธ์Œ์ด ๋ฌด๊ฒ๋‹ค. ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋„์ฐฉํ•œ ์ •๊ฑฐ์žฅ์—์„œ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ B๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋ณด์•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๋ณด์ด์ง€ ์•Š๋Š”๋‹ค. ๋ฐฐ์šฐ A๋Š” ๋น„์— ์ –์€ ์ž์‹ ์„ ์ณ๋‹ค๋ณด๋Š” ์ฃผ์œ„์˜ ์‹œ์„ ์„ ๋Š๋‚€๋‹ค. ์ž…์ˆ ์ด ํŒŒ๋ฅด๋ฅด ๋–จ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ถ”์œ„๊ฐ€ ๊ทธ์ œ์„œ์•ผ ๋Š๊ปด์ง„๋‹ค. ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ž ๊น ๋ฏธ์ณค๋˜๊ฑธ๊นŒ. ์„œ๋Ÿฌ์›€์ด ๋ฐ€๋ ค์˜จ๋‹ค. ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ์—†๋Š” ๊ตฌ์„์ชฝ์œผ๋กœ ๊ฑธ์–ด๊ฐ€ ์ฃผ์ € ์•‰๋Š”๋‹ค. ์ –์€ ๋จธ๋ฆฌ๊ฒฐ์— ํ๋ฅด๋Š” ๋ฌผ๋ฐฉ์šธ์ด ์–ผ๊ตด์„ ํƒ€๊ณ  ๋–จ์–ด์ง„๋‹ค. ์ด์   ๋”์ด์ƒ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ B๋ฅผ ๋– ์˜ฌ๋ฆฌ๊ธฐ๋„ ์‹ซ๋‹ค. ์ด์ œ๋Š” ์ •๋ง๋กœ ์•ˆ๋…•. ๋•Œ๋งˆ์นจ ์ฃผ์ €์•‰์€ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ A๋ฅผ ํ–ฅํ•ด์„œ ํ•œ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ๊ฑธ์–ด์˜จ๋‹ค. ๋ฐœ์ž๊ตญ ์†Œ๋ฆฌ์— ๋ฐฐ์šฐ A๋Š” ๊ณ ๊ฐœ๋ฅผ ๋“ ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์„œ์„œํžˆ ๋ฒˆ์ง€๋Š” ๋ฏธ์†Œ. ์–ด๋””์„ ๊ฐ€ ์Œ์•…์ด ํ˜๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ณ  ์–ด๋–ค ์˜ํ™”์ธ์ง€ ๋“œ๋ผ๋งˆ์ธ์ง€ ๋ชจ๋ฅผ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๋Š” ๋์ด ๋‚œ๋‹ค. ์–ด๋‘ ์„ ๋ฎ๋Š” ์žฅ๋ง‰. ๊ด€๊ฐ๋“ค์€ ์„œ์„œํžˆ ์‚ฌ๋ผ์ง€๊ณ  ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ์„œ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๋Š” ์žŠํ˜€์ง„๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‚˜ ๋๋‚œ ์ค„ ์•Œ์•˜๋˜ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ์— ๋ฐฐ์šฐ A๊ฐ€ ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚˜ ์™ธ์นœ๋‹ค. "๋‚˜๋Š” ์ด์ œ ๋”์ด์ƒ ์—ด๋ฆฐ ๊ฒฐ๋ง์€ ์‹ซ์–ด. ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ์–ผ๋งˆ๋‚˜ ์˜ค๋žœ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ์ง€๋‚˜์„œ ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋งŒ๋‚œ ์ค„ ์•Œ์•„. ์•„๋ฌด๋ฆฌ ์šด๋ช…์˜ ์žฅ๋‚œ์„ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ ํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ•ด๋„ ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ์—‡๊ฐˆ๋ฆฐ ์šด๋ช…์ด ๋˜ ์žˆ์„๊นŒ. ์–ด๋ฆด๋•Œ ๋ณด๋˜ ๋™ํ™”๋“ค์„ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ด. ๋ชจ๋‘๋“ค ํ–‰๋ณตํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์˜ค๋ž˜์˜ค๋ž˜ ์‚ด์•˜๋ฐ์š”, ํ•˜๋ฉฐ ๋๋‚˜์ž๋‚˜. ๋‚˜๋„ ๋„ˆ๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋‚œ ์ˆœ๊ฐ„๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ํ–‰๋ณต์„ ๋Š˜ ๊ฟˆ๊ฟจ์–ด. ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋œจ๋œจ๋ฏธ์ง€๊ทผํ•œ ๊ฒฐ๋ง๋”ฐ์œ„๋Š” ์ง‘์–ด์ณ. ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋„ ํ–‰๋ณตํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์˜ค๋ž˜์˜ค๋ž˜ ์‚ด์•˜๋‹ค๋Š” ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๋กœ ๋๋งบ์Œ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์–ด." ์ €๋Š” ์—ด๋ฆฐ ๊ฒฐ๋ง๋ณด๋‹ค๋Š” ์ง„๋ถ€ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋ป”ํ•ด๋„ ํ•ดํ”ผ์—”๋”ฉ์ด ์ข‹์•„์š” ^^

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  • ์žŠ์„ ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ๊ฐ๋™๊ณผ ๊ณ ๋งˆ์›€

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    ์ž‘๋…„ ํ˜„์ถฉ์ผ ์ฒซ์งธ ์•„๋“œ๋‹˜์ด ๊ตฐ์ธ ์•„์ €์”จ๋ฅผ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๋ฉฐ ์ง์ ‘ ์ ์–ด์˜จ ํŽธ์ง€ ๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์ง€๋‚˜์น˜๊ธฐ์—” ์•„๋“ค ๋งˆ์Œ์ด ์˜ˆ๋ป์„œ ์นœ๊ตฌ์—๊ฒŒ ํŽธ์ง€ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์ „๋‹ฌํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ ๋ช‡ ๋ถ„ ๋’ค ์ƒ๊ฐ์ง€๋„ ๋ชปํ•˜๊ฒŒ ํฐ ์•„๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ์ „ํ•ด๋‹ฌ๋ผ๋ฉฐ ๋‹ต๊ธ€์„ ๋ณด๋‚ด ์™”๋”๋ผ๊ตฌ์š”~ ์•„๋“ค๊ณผ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์นœ๊ตฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ณด๋‚ด์ค€ ๋‹ต๊ธ€์˜ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉฐ ๋Š๊ผˆ๋˜ ๊ฐ๋™๊ณผ ๊ณ ๋งˆ์›€์ด ์ƒ๊ฐ๋‚˜์„œ ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํฌ์ŠคํŒ… ์˜ฌ๋ ค๋ด…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. P.S ์นœ๊ตฌ์•ผ ํ•ญ์ƒ ๋ชธ ์กฐ์‹ฌํžˆ ๊ฑด๊ฐ•ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ œ64ํšŒ ํ˜„์ถฉ์ผ์ธ ์˜ค๋Š˜ ์ž ์‹œ๋‚˜๋งˆ ๋‚˜๋ผ๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•ด ๋ชฉ์ˆจ์„ ๋ฐ”์นœ ๋งŽ์€ ๋ถ„๋“ค์˜ ์ถฉ์„ฑ๊ณผ ํฌ์ƒ์„ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด๋Š” ๋‚ ์ด ๋˜๊ธธ ๋ฐ”๋ž˜๋ด…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. #ํ˜„์ถฉ์ผ #์ฒซ์งธ์•„๋“คํŽธ์ง€ #์•„๋น ์ฐฌ์Šค #์นœ๊ตฌ #๋‹ต๊ธ€ #๊ฐ๋™ #๊ณ ๋งˆ์›€ #์ข‹์•„์š” #ํ•ญ์ƒ๊ฑด๊ฐ•ํ•ด๋ผ #ํผ๋ธ”๋ฆฌํ†  #publyto

    $atom . 2019.06.06 03:41

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  • wooden chopsticks caliglipi

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    Calligraphy class! This time, it was a class with wooden chopsticks. It's harder than I thought, but it's fun. Next week, with a toothbrush... #Christian Church #California #Tree chopsticks calley #

    $kogguk . 2019.05.29 14:30

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  • #The dilemma of coin and stock single #Shortle

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    #The dilemma of coin and stock single #Shortle

    $rance . 2019.05.29 00:16

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  • #Doll+ child's law #Short words

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    #Doll+ child's law #Short words

    $rance . 2019.05.20 12:28

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  • # Power #Short

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    # Power #Short

    $rance . 2019.05.16 19:33

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  • #Strong #Short

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    #Strong #Short

    $rance . 2019.05.13 22:10

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  • What is true good?

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    I looked back a week and I wrote six good notes... Today, let's have a time to worry about. When I first wrote the first diary, I felt, "I'm a very nice person too." After a while, can I call this kind of behavior a goodI was wondering if... With questions, what is true good? Ask me a question... In a world where people live together in harmony with others, isn't it natural for these little things to happen? I kept thinking... I feel a little ashamed that I was packing things that I should do as good deeds. Maybe a lot of people are praising me more than this? You're gonna do what you deserve, and you're gonna be quiet. Let's look back at me today. I still haven't found the answer to what is a real good deed. Still, I felt myself changing little by little as I wrote these good deeds. Do you have any room in your mind to look around me with a little interest?

    $ha3timbsgyge . 2019.05.13 18:54

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  • Understanding and misunderstanding.

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    Starting this morning, I'm going to the hospital for my first child's dermatology. It's a semi-general hospital on Sunday, so it's been a long time for many people to wait. The final illness of the first son after the doctor's appointment is chickenpox.ใ…œใ…œ But the problem is, from now on, It's contagious. I thought maybe it'd be a problem for the other kids, so the wait order was late, I'm gonna explain the situation to the cashier, and I'm gonna get out of the hospital. He's angry that you're an older man with a faster waiting number than we are.แ…ฎแ…ฎ You've been waiting a lot for him, and you've accepted that we cut it in line?! Of course you can think that, or you can be angry. It's the beginning of the problem that we've failed to explain and apologize to each and every one of us. But even if you're going to explain it, you're going to be too much, and I'm going to be out of my mind for a while, and we're going to have a verbal fight. I finally ended up saying I'm really sorry. It seems that understanding and misunderstanding are often very different depending on how you think and accept them. "It's important not to be mistaken, but it's more important not to be misunderstood." "It is important to take into consideration and trust the other side's position, and to solve the problem through dialogue fully." "The understanding is that the heart and heart make, and the misunderstanding is that the head and the mind make." I hope our fans will always look at each other from a more considerate and understanding perspective. (For a society that lives together) I'm sorry again to the old man who must have been upset by this morning... #Understanding #Think from the other side #Publisho #publyto #need in human relationship #so needed

    $atom . 2019.05.12 18:29

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  • # Words... # Short words

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    # Words... # Short words

    $rance . 2019.05.10 07:29

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  • #Mentow-direction #Short

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    #Mentow-direction #Short

    $rance . 2019.05.09 09:09

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  • A short-lived writer... I'm glad you're not a writer.

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    I thought I had to write every day, so I didn't know what I was going to write Sometimes writing happens naturally when you write. I'm going to practice writing by random writing. There's a saying that the more you write, the better, but that's not necessarily true. But it's true that if you don't write, your writing skills will drop dramatically. I'm just trying to keep writing for the sake of maintaining the status quo. In terms of writing skills, when a person becomes middle-aged, he or she definitely feels less able to write creative writing. Most famous literary works still tend to come out when you're young. But what's fortunate, unlike in the field of science and technology, is that in literature, even the mature, mature middle-aged writer has produced many great works. Then it's not the time for me to be a very old backroom guy. Some people are over 80 years old, 90 years old, and they do a lot of work. I've seen what Lee Young-ha gave before on YouTube. The most memorable thing he said was the writer's short life span. I have studied the average life expectancy of each job in Korea and Japan. In the long-lived profession, priests such as pastors and brides topped the list. Next was professors, educators, and politicians who could say what they wanted to say. These people usually live longer than average. On the other hand, the shortest-lived professional was the author. The writer's life span was surprisingly only a little over sixty. Living above 75 on average, the average life expectancy of those in their 60 years. That's how stressful a writer is. Also, writers often live in poverty. You can't eat enough healthy food or relax. Also, it's hard to be healthy even if you look at the writer's work environment. The author should sit in one position for a long time and write like a painter. Staying in a sitting position for a long time is a very unhealthy act. The chances of getting all kinds of adult diseases are going to be higher. In this situation, the author will often touch unhealthy things such as cigarettes and alcohol to relieve stress. It's a structure that inevitably leads to more and more writers dying. When I heard this, I thought, "I'm so glad I didn't dare become a writer." And yet, after retiring, I wonder if writing comfortably and quietly inside the house will shorten my life. Don't get too stressed out and just write at the right level. I didn't write anything serious today either. I just recited the lecture like a passing story. It's also good to fill the screen with this useless content without stress. Haha

    $eunsik . 2019.05.08 09:54

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  • # That it doesn't work # Short words

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    # That it doesn't work # Short words

    $rance . 2019.05.07 00:28

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  • There is a mirror of conscience that is clearer than CCTV.

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    These days, the world can't go around without being filmed by CCTV. We live in an apartment, a house. Government offices, shops, buildings. The roads, the alleys, the passageways. Now, we've got a lot of cars, and we've got a lot of cars, and we've got a lot We are being photographed numerous times. They prevent and solve crimes, they stop illegal dumping of garbage, they find out who's missing. It's true that there are a lot of positives, But I can't help but think that it could be abused for human rights violations or crimes. There's nothing you can do about it that you don't want to know. "People have a better conscience than CCTV." I hope to become a beautiful and healthy society that harmonizes well.

    $fire . 2019.05.06 10:52

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  • #5 Poseon #Short

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    #5 Poseon #Short

    $rance . 2019.05.05 22:44

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  • #Contact #Short

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    #Contact #Short

    $rance . 2019.05.03 01:30

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  • This place where I used to run around when I was a kid...

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    When I was a toddler, I went to elementary school with my grandmother and uncle because of the double income of my parents Especially Gamcheon, which was my uncle's house, is my childhood playground where I could always get together with my peers and run late into the night. Wait here! Gamcheon is exactly the village where 6.25 refugees settled into a new site in the 1950s, and is a residential village with houses attached to the rock and terraced terrain that we commonly call Gobawi. The old adage is often said... Although it was a place that was underdeveloped, 30 years later, it has become the first major tourist destination in Busan, with a clean and lively look. For someone, it may be just a strange and formal tour of Busan. For today's parents and elders, I remember my childhood memories and memories. And for me, the existence of an old town that is still well preserved is very touching, so I want to share it with many people. P.S Oh, by the way! In the posting picture, pizza is donated and received because there is a good event.That's why it was so delicious. #Busan #CEO Tourism Area #Gamcheon Culture Village # #Great with children #Remember #Little #Publito #publyto #where to play #

    $atom . 2019.05.01 14:50

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  • thoughtless writing

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    # I don't have any idea # Because I have no idea. I've been feeling a lot of tension lately, and my heart is pounding, so I have to go to the hospital. I'm thinking about whether there's something in my mind. Health? Not bad. Family? Peace? Coins are a bit of a strain, but they're not new. I've just had a lot of bruising time these days. I think it's time for a new change. But it may be this frustration that you can't do it in a hurry.

    $simjy . 2019.04.30 23:19

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  • #Lotto #Shortle

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    #Lotto #Shortle

    $rance . 2019.04.30 21:11

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  • # Dream #Short

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    # Dream #Short

    $rance . 2019.04.28 14:22

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  • #Attention #Short

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    #Attention #Short

    $rance . 2019.04.27 04:24

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